This haiku
smashed watermelon
punctuating long last notes
oak galls & crickets
went through many permutations:
oak galls & crickets
long last notes of a summer
passing past crushed watermelon
oak galls & crickets
long last notes of a summer
passing past watermelon crushed
oak galls & crickets
passing long last notes past
watermelon crushed
oak galls & crickets
passing past long last notes
watermelon crushed
And by some leap we get “smashed” and “punctuating”.
And so for day 824
16.03.2009